Excellent story! There were several points during it that had me laughing out loud, particularly when you keep playing a ridiculous choice to its conclusion, such as falling down on your knees in front of the girl begging for forgiveness until you are thrown out of the restaurant.
This definitely was a good use of an hour or so of my life. If you have any more stories around I would really like to check them out. Keep it up!
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Dec 30, 2008 4:10 PM
Best story ever! I hope you are considering writing a sequel.
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Oct 16, 2007 6:33 PM
Pretty Friggen good, man.
Favorited.
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Jul 24, 2007 2:37 AM
I gave it a ten! Its well funny and long!Theres only one problem with it: It only has a view of a boy so if a girl trys it(not that iam a girl)then it looks like the girl is a lesbian! Check out my story...may not be as good as this one but still is pretty good!
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Dec 13, 2006 9:35 PM
Extremely, well written. I have viewed a lot of stuff on this site thus far and have only come across this and another, that was even worth the time of day. Just as a suggestion (Other than that you make more.) Would be to get a little more creative.
And with that, I have nothing more to say.
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Apr 14, 2006 8:04 PM
It'd be cool if in the next one (if you make one) you can get her mom. heh that'd be funny
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Jan 17, 2006 3:18 PM
Actuall, Michael, I'm stone cold sober, and I gave it a ten.
Thanks for reminding me that I don't have any pot and my dealer isn't returning my calls, though.
Appreciate it.
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Aug 7, 2005 11:58 PM
Honestly, how much pot do you have to smoke to rate this story a TEN??
Christ Almighty, this is shit.
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Jul 8, 2004 9:09 AM
Seriously, go through this story exploring every option. This will make you laugh out loud every time! Excellent work!
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Jul 6, 2004 11:37 PM
It is now finished! I hope everyone enjoys it! Please rate it and consider voting for it.
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May 25, 2004 5:06 PM
One of the best stories yet--- but please finish it!
This definitely was a good use of an hour or so of my life. If you have any more stories around I would really like to check them out. Keep it up!
Favorited.
And with that, I have nothing more to say.
Thanks for reminding me that I don't have any pot and my dealer isn't returning my calls, though.
Appreciate it.
Christ Almighty, this is shit.