Wow this story is pretty good!!! Took awhile and it is very interesting, I like it very much
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Jul 19, 2005 1:51 PM
I think I get it! I really think I get it! Very good story--very tricky too. Initially, I was completely confused and ready to give up, but then something clicked and I began to start putting the pieces together. Anyway, I have to say, you are brilliant, dude.
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Jan 26, 2005 1:28 PM
I think when you end the story, you should include a summary for the confused reader. Just to tie down any loose ends.
Confusing or not, this was an awesome story.
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Nov 29, 2004 11:00 AM
Well done! Excellent use of the online format to allow the reader to experience the disorientation of the unfortunate protagonist. Very disturbing without being graphic.
Confusing or not, this was an awesome story.
The best story on this site that I've read.