"look who came out of the US! Bill Gates and Stephen Hawking!"
Erm, you clearly haven't read this then:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steven_hawking
He isn't American.
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Dec 22, 2005 12:02 PM
I'm not going to rate it yet since you noted that you didn't want to release it so quickly, and it's not complete, etc.
Anyways, back in the day, before we had authors like donteatpoop and chubbyteletubby, before we all evolved in our writing, I would have given this a 9 but now the bar has been raised so much that today I would probably give it a 7-8. It's not bad but I don't like the overall concept of how it's less like a descriptive story and more like a training course for world domination. But I that's what you were going for. Anyways, it was pretty good.
("The Item" CYOA version was still much better ;))
Erm, you clearly haven't read this then:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steven_hawking
He isn't American.
Anyways, back in the day, before we had authors like donteatpoop and chubbyteletubby, before we all evolved in our writing, I would have given this a 9 but now the bar has been raised so much that today I would probably give it a 7-8. It's not bad but I don't like the overall concept of how it's less like a descriptive story and more like a training course for world domination. But I that's what you were going for. Anyways, it was pretty good.
("The Item" CYOA version was still much better ;))