||10.00||2010-05-09 11:07:58May 9, 2010||great story can't wait til you finish it|
||8.00||2009-05-12 20:44:12May 12, 2009|
||10.00||2009-01-21 08:45:43Jan 21, 2009||I'm very interested in this story. Hoping you will continue it soon. :) Great work, as I've seen from the comments you have improved the original drastically.|
||8.00||2008-11-30 19:25:27Nov 30, 2008||this is a lot better than many of the stories on this site.|
||10.00||2008-11-28 16:32:25Nov 28, 2008|
||0.00||2007-05-08 11:11:09May 8, 2007||The writer has created a very lush and horrific environment that you are guided through at a break-neck pace. The characters are very real, and the settings are detailed and all too believable. This story is mind candy for any reader!|
||10.00||2007-05-08 11:09:10May 8, 2007|
||6.00||2006-12-04 17:20:14Dec 4, 2006||It was a decent story that was coherent and easy to understand. More effort could have been put into the writing and it was unfinished. Had you tied up the plot I probably would've given it an 8, maybe even a 9. Decent job.|
||9.00||2005-08-05 10:16:27Aug 5, 2005||I took the same path as they did, but I think it was well-written (I can't recall any spelling errors). Though it was trite and a bit on the vague side (as poop said), I think it would be difficult not to give something a 9 that held my attention for more than 5 rooms (a rare happenstance).|
||9.00||2005-07-21 08:44:56Jul 21, 2005||I must have taken a different path than DEP or Homer, because I thought this was a very entertaining story. And as far as formatting goes, I think you did find.
A couple parts even made me chuckle. Look forward to seeing it finished. Maybe you should keep throwing in some of those 'comic-relief' moments, which helps offset all the action - which this story doesn't lack! All in all, well done!
||5.00||2005-06-15 13:57:29Jun 15, 2005||I'd say a five is an accurate score. Story has a good idea and the writing isn't bad, but it can be hard to read without any seperation between paragraphs. Also could use a little more description, like there was a boat in the house if you take the secret entrance. I had no idea there was even water and I was presented with the choice of driving away in the boat.|
||5.00||2004-09-14 12:10:30Sep 14, 2004||pretty good|