Dark Secrets
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
|---|---|---|---|
KingMalice |
10.00 |
2010-05-09 11:07:58May 9, 2010 | great story can't wait til you finish it |
| molly1990 |
8.00 |
2009-05-12 20:44:12May 12, 2009 | |
| Calen |
10.00 |
2009-01-21 08:45:43Jan 21, 2009 | I'm very interested in this story. Hoping you will continue it soon. :) Great work, as I've seen from the comments you have improved the original drastically. |
meteomage |
8.00 |
2008-11-30 19:25:27Nov 30, 2008 | this is a lot better than many of the stories on this site. |
| Natasha |
10.00 |
2008-11-28 16:32:25Nov 28, 2008 | |
| Jiggaman |
0.00 |
2007-05-08 11:11:09May 8, 2007 | The writer has created a very lush and horrific environment that you are guided through at a break-neck pace. The characters are very real, and the settings are detailed and all too believable. This story is mind candy for any reader! |
| Jiggaman |
10.00 |
2007-05-08 11:09:10May 8, 2007 | |
apotheosis |
6.00 |
2006-12-04 17:20:14Dec 4, 2006 | It was a decent story that was coherent and easy to understand. More effort could have been put into the writing and it was unfinished. Had you tied up the plot I probably would've given it an 8, maybe even a 9. Decent job. |
| michaelrayholt |
9.00 |
2005-08-05 10:16:27Aug 5, 2005 | I took the same path as they did, but I think it was well-written (I can't recall any spelling errors). Though it was trite and a bit on the vague side (as poop said), I think it would be difficult not to give something a 9 that held my attention for more than 5 rooms (a rare happenstance). |
ChubbyTeletubby |
9.00 |
2005-07-21 08:44:56Jul 21, 2005 | I must have taken a different path than DEP or Homer, because I thought this was a very entertaining story. And as far as formatting goes, I think you did find. A couple parts even made me chuckle. Look forward to seeing it finished. Maybe you should keep throwing in some of those 'comic-relief' moments, which helps offset all the action - which this story doesn't lack! All in all, well done! |
donteatpoop |
5.00 |
2005-06-15 13:57:29Jun 15, 2005 | I'd say a five is an accurate score. Story has a good idea and the writing isn't bad, but it can be hard to read without any seperation between paragraphs. Also could use a little more description, like there was a boat in the house if you take the secret entrance. I had no idea there was even water and I was presented with the choice of driving away in the boat. |
jeffisthebest |
5.00 |
2004-09-14 12:10:30Sep 14, 2004 | pretty good |
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