Final Quest

Written by Cat2000 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheBloodyRoses	Jun 28, 2020	It's a pretty okay story and I did have a bit of fun with it. However I deducted points for the annoying and practically impossible "left or right" corridors. In fact the only reason I even made an account was to express my frustration with wasting so much of my time trying to progress through the story only to be unable to even finish it since he corridors keep looping on the same rooms. This is honestly an awful mechanic. I get that it adds to the whole random and realism factor in that a person that hasn't been there before wouldn't know where to go but at LEAST come up with some way to hint at the sequence because otherwise it makes the game unplayable. I'm gonna keep trying for a little longer in the hopes that I'll at least be able to finish the game but somehow I doubt it. by TheBloodyRoses on Jun 28, 2020
donteatpoop	Feb 28, 2016	by donteatpoop on Feb 28, 2016
Jazz4455	May 19, 2015	it was really good. i thought it was really cool. good job, cat2000 by Jazz4455 on May 19, 2015
donteatpoop	Mar 11, 2015	Dafuq Pely? That's the worst reason for a low rating ever. Undeserving. by donteatpoop on Mar 11, 2015
Pelyphin	Mar 4, 2015	No issue with the story. Ready for some change at the top of the page. by Pelyphin on Mar 4, 2015
Creeper909	Feb 18, 2015	I FINISHED IT THERE ACTUALLY IS A ENDING IT WAS SAD BUT GOOD!!!!!!! by Creeper909 on Feb 18, 2015
Creeper909	Feb 17, 2015	I have to say, this is SO long. But even better, it is SO good. I would read this a billion times a DAY. by Creeper909 on Feb 17, 2015
Bandra	Oct 15, 2014	Very very awesome!! I didn't quite finish it but I love it so far! by Bandra on Oct 15, 2014
dnextreme88	Aug 10, 2014	by dnextreme88 on Aug 10, 2014
Lackofmop	Jun 30, 2013	Good and has a lot of branches, but predictable. by Lackofmop on Jun 30, 2013
Pooky642	May 11, 2012	Why the endless loop of crossroads? Why??? Is that really necessary? No. Otherwise, if it had actually finished, I would have really liked it! by Pooky642 on May 11, 2012
Tim2000	Jul 24, 2011	by Tim2000 on Jul 24, 2011
EndMaster	Jan 3, 2011	I remember reading this one a long time ago, and I probably would rate this one higher if it hadn't been for the boring crossroad stuff. The rest of it was done well. by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
Matabichos	Feb 27, 2008	by Matabichos on Feb 27, 2008
Goren	Aug 9, 2007	by Goren on Aug 9, 2007
CCRUNNR	Apr 12, 2007	That was great you should make another! THANKS! by CCRUNNR on Apr 12, 2007
apotheosis	Jul 29, 2006	Interesting ideas. A lot of complexity, and a very large story, which is nice. Some description was lacking in a lot of rooms, some of the crossroads seemed pointless, and some of the plot grew monotonous but due to the size and amount of work that looks like it was put in I'll give it an 8. by apotheosis on Jul 29, 2006
druidwolf	Mar 21, 2006	Excellent story! I greatly enjoyed the depth of choices and the way the story engaged me. by druidwolf on Mar 21, 2006
Marshmello	Mar 19, 2006	It's good, but I got trapped at some crossroads... (left...you come to some crossroads, right... you come to some crossroads... etc) by Marshmello on Mar 19, 2006
michaelrayholt	Aug 8, 2005	Too obtuse. Also, I agree with donteatpoop - WHY the hell is Esther looking for something that hasn't been seen for hundreds of years exactly?!? A) Dragons, idealized as much as they are, could not possibly have had that long of a lifespan, and B) Something that's been missing THAT long and NOT needed for THAT long had better have a HELLUVA explanation behind its sudden urgent necessity before the average adventurer starts out. Sheesh. by michaelrayholt on Aug 8, 2005
donteatpoop	May 26, 2005	why are we going after the green dragon? it hasn't been seen for hundreds of years, right? by donteatpoop on May 26, 2005
steelshadowL	Apr 29, 2005	Wahooo!!!! Finaly. This is the best cyoa... I mean IS I've ever read. Maybe that's 'causer it was the first one I read here. meh. Anyway, I can't belive it's finaly finished! yay! Great story. thx. by steelshadowL on Apr 29, 2005
jp33	Mar 16, 2005	by jp33 on Mar 16, 2005
jeffisthebest	Oct 26, 2004	Very good. by jeffisthebest on Oct 26, 2004
Cat2000	Oct 26, 2004	It's relatively easy, though it does take some time. When you get to a crossroads, look at the links to left and right. The link(s) you've already clicked on will be shaded differently to the ones you haven't by Cat2000 on Oct 26, 2004
HydraLing	Oct 16, 2004	by HydraLing on Oct 16, 2004
GaMeR86	Oct 6, 2004	Interesting. Better than what I can currently do, but good. Not too short, but not too long. Good use of room looping. It has GaMeR's full attention. Keep up the good work by GaMeR86 on Oct 6, 2004
easlern	Oct 1, 2004	by easlern on Oct 1, 2004
Victoria7	May 18, 2004	by Victoria7 on May 18, 2004
ShannonK	Apr 25, 2004	Yeah, somehow I managed to free myself from the left right curse. I don't know how, though!!! Kinda wish I did... by ShannonK on Apr 25, 2004
ShannonK	Apr 25, 2004	Wow. I can't believe there are so many rooms!!! by ShannonK on Apr 25, 2004
Izzers	Apr 22, 2004	Um...I keep getting stuck at "You come to a crossroads: right or left?" Doesn't matter which way you go, you just end up coming to another crossroads, and another, and another. Pretty hilarious. by Izzers on Apr 22, 2004
JaMassey	Apr 12, 2004	by JaMassey on Apr 12, 2004
TheKoolAidGuy	Mar 6, 2004	Great story. It was one of the first I ever read. But I do have to critisize the fact that there is very little description in the rooms. by TheKoolAidGuy on Mar 6, 2004
seamanvincent	Feb 7, 2004	it's definately a 10...I almost made it a 9 (it sucks that it doesnt have an ending) but the story and characters have great depth and it's one of the larger stories at this site. by seamanvincent on Feb 7, 2004
Benway	Feb 5, 2004	Finding a dragon may not be an original concept, but this is a good story. It's well written. The layout makes sense and it's pretty absorbing. It would be good if the left or right choices had a bit more description though, even if it's irrelevant. by Benway on Feb 5, 2004
KrzyPrincess	Jan 28, 2004	by KrzyPrincess on Jan 28, 2004
Nuquerna	Jan 28, 2004	I said it before and I say it again: "I love it! Can't wait till it's finished." :) by Nuquerna on Jan 28, 2004
lioness1081	Jan 24, 2004	Great story! I wish you had added more detail to Ester's surroundings. It would make the story much more vivid and when it comes to the choices of left or right it would make it easier to choose the correct one instead of guessing. by lioness1081 on Jan 24, 2004
CJW	Jan 16, 2004	Wow, I love this. You are an excellent writer! This is truly amazing! I am very impressed. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. by CJW on Jan 16, 2004
lxkoons	Jan 10, 2004	by lxkoons on Jan 10, 2004
iceprincess108	Jan 9, 2004	by iceprincess108 on Jan 9, 2004
ladyjilla	Jan 9, 2004	by ladyjilla on Jan 9, 2004

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