The Hunter mission 1
||6.00||2006-02-03 19:27:42Feb 3, 2006||This story is mediocre, with several spelling and grammar errors (which I know I am not immune to), but does have a nice framework to it. If it had more detail, better characterization, and less "Do you pick A or B" rooms with almost no lines of text it could actually be a fun and interesting story.
As for the rating, I think this is fair. Although I was tempted to rate it lower since the author had the audacity to give himself a 10. I personally think authors should not be allowed to rate their own stories... But that's just me.
||10.00||2005-11-10 23:04:45Nov 10, 2005||nuff said|
||6.00||2005-03-06 04:44:34Mar 6, 2005||Not bad. Not great. I think you could do better if you put a little more time into it. Try using quotation marks, too.|