The Hunter mission 1
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
|---|---|---|---|
dragavan |
6.00 |
2006-02-03 19:27:42Feb 3, 2006 | This story is mediocre, with several spelling and grammar errors (which I know I am not immune to), but does have a nice framework to it. If it had more detail, better characterization, and less "Do you pick A or B" rooms with almost no lines of text it could actually be a fun and interesting story. As for the rating, I think this is fair. Although I was tempted to rate it lower since the author had the audacity to give himself a 10. I personally think authors should not be allowed to rate their own stories... But that's just me. |
Joebwoy |
10.00 |
2005-11-10 23:04:45Nov 10, 2005 | nuff said |
ChubbyTeletubby |
6.00 |
2005-03-06 04:44:34Mar 6, 2005 | Not bad. Not great. I think you could do better if you put a little more time into it. Try using quotation marks, too. |
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