||10.00||2012-11-28 21:45:11Nov 28, 2012||Okay, so, I read this way back in the day. I loved it. I even commented on it once already. But, dude. This world, story, writing... *sigh*
EndMaster, you are an amazing writer. Seriously. I've been working on a novel for a year or so now, and I keep thinking about this story. The detail, the dialogue, fucking everything. If I ever get my thing published, would it be alright to list you as one of the inspirations for it? Because you fucking are.
Granted, I'm not stealing anything from you, but it IS a fantasy novel, so it has, you know... fantasy shit in it. Anyway, thank you for inspiring me to write in the first place.
I'm going back to reading your story now. Again. Because it's amazing.
||0.00||2012-09-28 13:43:13Sep 28, 2012||Heh. Well that is certainly one way of looking at it.|
||10.00||2012-09-22 09:50:27Sep 22, 2012||Well I don't think he was a villain more like a victim of nature we all know we can't defy our true nature no matter how hard we try welp that's my shitty philosophical input.|
||10.00||2011-10-30 11:29:51Oct 30, 2011|
||10.00||2011-01-15 03:49:12Jan 15, 2011||Should be a motion picture!!|
||0.00||2011-01-03 09:12:37Jan 3, 2011||Milianotus is a fucktard who obviously didn't get it. The protagonist is a fucking villian (Should've been pretty obvious with the title and first few pages) and doing evil things are going to be the choices. If you didn't want to be a "sick conqueror" (Lol at your sensitivity) you shouldn't have been reading it in the first place.|
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||10.00||2010-11-25 10:12:03Nov 25, 2010||EPIC!|
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||9.00||2010-05-03 08:23:07May 3, 2010||Another great story from you|
||10.00||2010-02-02 10:09:12Feb 2, 2010||Excellent story. Congratulations to the author.|
||10.00||2010-01-18 22:21:30Jan 18, 2010||Amazing story.|
||9.00||2010-01-18 18:29:45Jan 18, 2010|
||9.00||2009-11-08 12:03:56Nov 8, 2009||Great story|
||6.00||2009-10-22 05:40:23Oct 22, 2009||I loved the beginning, I loved the main character, I loved the idea... but what the fuck?! I didn't want to be any kind of sick conquer of the city! More choices, please, just like there was in the Legend. Very good story, but not a good infinite-story, that's why it's only 6!|
||10.00||2009-07-29 03:20:24Jul 29, 2009||i would love to see a spin of with the other types of magic to choice from|
||10.00||2009-01-25 11:57:00Jan 25, 2009||kick ass man|
||10.00||2009-01-04 20:43:55Jan 4, 2009|
||9.00||2008-12-02 12:05:49Dec 2, 2008||really enjoyed it. i liked the way you blended in the modern mix with fantasy (as if mages and necromancers swore like us lol)|
||10.00||2008-09-29 23:38:27Sep 29, 2008||I spent so much time on this. One of the best stories (interactive or not), that I've had the pleasure of reading on the internet.
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||10.00||2008-07-08 15:20:25Jul 8, 2008||Excellent, even though i'm new, and this is the second story at this site i've read, (the first being ground zero) I think this is a very good read.
Excellent work at interconnecting the branches together,
I had alot of fun reading this one, very well thought out and very detailed
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||10.00||2008-01-08 21:53:17Jan 8, 2008||This is the greatest love story ever written! I love a little gore with my romance. By far my favorite story on the site... possibly my favorite story ever written.|
||10.00||2008-01-04 18:13:02Jan 4, 2008|
||10.00||2007-12-06 21:45:43Dec 6, 2007||one of the best stories ive read|
||10.00||2007-10-31 13:56:51Oct 31, 2007|
||10.00||2007-10-29 15:43:02Oct 29, 2007||very good, i can't stop reading|
||10.00||2007-10-22 20:53:42Oct 22, 2007||3 words...BEST STORY EVER!!!!|
||10.00||2007-10-07 02:35:52Oct 7, 2007||Well, now that I've done this, End is sure to reset the ratings for sure... right? :)
Perhaps you've never put this much THOUGHT into a story before, perhaps you've never hit on a genre agreeable to me, perhaps I'm waking up from a long nap... I don't know. This was a very enjoyable read.
Even with my eye for detail, I don't remember any out-and-out errors (although you may want to change "Narrow minded focus on killing someone" on the first page to "Narrow mindedly focusing...") that were so grievous as to destroy my concentration.
I particularly enjoyed the fact that some pictures had captions, much like there would be in an ACTUAL book. Have you considered having this published, by the way?
Excellent work. I only wish I could focus on any ONE story long enough to do the same.
||10.00||2007-09-14 14:39:05Sep 14, 2007|
||0.00||2007-08-20 19:52:42Aug 20, 2007||This story is fucking awesome. One of the best I've ever read.|
||10.00||2007-08-20 19:51:24Aug 20, 2007||This story is amazing.|
||10.00||2007-08-07 17:23:15Aug 7, 2007||That was amazing. Best story I've seen yet.|
||10.00||2007-08-03 13:01:29Aug 3, 2007||This story is fucking amazing. Thank you for that!|
||10.00||2007-06-13 02:30:15Jun 13, 2007||Utterly Superb. I read every room with great enjoyment.|
||0.00||2007-06-05 18:49:45Jun 5, 2007||true this is za best|
||10.00||2007-06-05 18:29:04Jun 5, 2007||THIS IS THA FREAKIN BEST STORY EVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!|
||10.00||2007-06-03 18:32:10Jun 3, 2007|
||10.00||2007-05-20 04:11:56May 20, 2007|
||0.00||2007-05-17 09:40:58May 17, 2007||I think this story wins for ratings...|
||10.00||2007-05-16 18:52:09May 16, 2007||Brilliant. I think this has to be your best story yet.|
||10.00||2007-04-29 15:32:08Apr 29, 2007||This is one of those situations where I wish I could give a half-point rating. I would like to give it a 9.5, taking off for some grammar mistakes. I also felt that the story meandered a little bit; it could have been a little tighter in terms of plot. I was happy to see big rooms with lots of action in them, but I would have appreciated even a bit more sensory description.
On the plus side, there are some very funny parts of this story and some vivid characters. Also, the plot is interesting and I'm always a fan of the anti-hero. I have decided to base this and future ratings on a relative scale for this site, so I give you a ten based on the fact that this is one of the five best stories I have read here.
And thanks for the heads-up on the carpet-munching witches. That means I need to not invite certain friends over for sleepovers anymore.
||10.00||2007-04-15 15:34:40Apr 15, 2007|
||9.00||2007-04-07 16:43:35Apr 7, 2007||My second favorite story on this site.|
||10.00||2007-03-22 22:59:45Mar 22, 2007||The sheer number of perfect ratings is astonishing. Part of me wants to ruin that just for the hell of it, but I'd have to be a total ass and pick a freakishly low number just to make a dent. "Surely," I thought, "I could at least find enough flaws to give it a nine."
And then I noticed that the story's outcome determined the moment you side between Big Red or the professor, and I was impressed. It flows very well, and doesn't ever seem to stall. It's a bit dialogue heavy in parts...but I get impatient after awhile...and, really, who am I to bicker about excessive verbose-ness? The dialogue and descriptions were either necessary for the visual imagery, or important to the plot or humor. It's long, but I can't really think of anything I could label as 'filler'.
The only thing I could possibly whine about is the freakish amount of power that the main characters have, that no one else does. Surely, someone out there would have been just as adept as at nature magic as the protagonist is at necromancy? Surely, the demons couldn't've taken over kingdoms that quickly? Surely, good could've put up more of a fight than just the sister? It all seems excessive. None of the lesser characters are nearly as powerful as the main ones. It's a ridiculous variation of God-modding.
But, really, who cares?
||10.00||2007-03-21 18:10:59Mar 21, 2007||Probably the best solo-author story on this site.|
||10.00||2007-03-14 18:26:00Mar 14, 2007||I SWEAR TO GOD THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! So many choices...and so many good endings! I liked every one of them. Keep up the good work!|
||10.00||2007-03-12 14:37:28Mar 12, 2007||Alright, alright, you've probably got to feel pretty good having so many perfect 10s, but man oh man you deserve them. Awesome story.|
||10.00||2007-03-06 21:28:05Mar 6, 2007||Very Excellent story. I went back and chose different directions and each different choice led to a completely different place. I do not know how this story could be improved upon.|
||10.00||2007-03-04 22:47:15Mar 4, 2007||Another excellent job EndMaster. This isn't my favorite of your works, but there is so much more detail and story in this than any of your other stories. Excellent plotlines, your character development was great and you actually managed to provide the reader with a series of interesting side characters.|
||10.00||2007-02-27 11:26:23Feb 27, 2007||Yes! So glad to see another EndMaster story and a fantasy one no less!|
||10.00||2007-02-19 16:57:06Feb 19, 2007||This is incredible,the fact that such a great story could be completed in only 2 days. I love the idea controling the "bad" guy for once. Lots of fun and humor too. and the violence-gotta love the violence.|
||10.00||2007-02-18 18:00:19Feb 18, 2007||This story kept me enthralled. Endmaster created a world similar to others I have seen before, but led me through it in a completely different way. He kept all the details straight throughout the story, and only minor blemishes in the writing quality were encountered. Truly something to be envious of.|
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