Necromancer

by EndMaster
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Salamislim
Salamislim		 Nov 28, 2012 Okay, so, I read this way back in the day. I loved it. I even commented on it once already. But, dude. This world, story, writing... *sigh*

EndMaster, you are an amazing writer. Seriously. I've been working on a novel for a year or so now, and I keep thinking about this story. The detail, the dialogue, fucking everything. If I ever get my thing published, would it be alright to list you as one of the inspirations for it? Because you fucking are.
Granted, I'm not stealing anything from you, but it IS a fantasy novel, so it has, you know... fantasy shit in it. Anyway, thank you for inspiring me to write in the first place.
I'm going back to reading your story now. Again. Because it's amazing.
EndMaster
EndMaster		 Sep 28, 2012 Heh. Well that is certainly one way of looking at it.
Marksdarkness
Marksdarkness		 Sep 22, 2012 Well I don't think he was a villain more like a victim of nature we all know we can't defy our true nature no matter how hard we try welp that's my shitty philosophical input.
FilipinoWalrus
FilipinoWalrus		 Oct 30, 2011
Serede
Serede		 Jan 15, 2011 Should be a motion picture!!
EndMaster
EndMaster		 Jan 3, 2011 Milianotus is a fucktard who obviously didn't get it. The protagonist is a fucking villian (Should've been pretty obvious with the title and first few pages) and doing evil things are going to be the choices. If you didn't want to be a "sick conqueror" (Lol at your sensitivity) you shouldn't have been reading it in the first place.
pedromundo
pedromundo		 Dec 22, 2010
infernalbovine
infernalbovine		 Nov 25, 2010 EPIC!
Zac6251
Zac6251		 Aug 17, 2010
silentninja
silentninja		 May 3, 2010 Another great story from you
bsal
bsal		 Feb 2, 2010 Excellent story. Congratulations to the author.
Lrdwhyt
Lrdwhyt		 Jan 18, 2010 Amazing story.
ShadowLycan
ShadowLycan		 Jan 18, 2010
nodnarB
nodnarB		 Nov 8, 2009 Great story
Milianotus
Milianotus		 Oct 22, 2009 I loved the beginning, I loved the main character, I loved the idea... but what the fuck?! I didn't want to be any kind of sick conquer of the city! More choices, please, just like there was in the Legend. Very good story, but not a good infinite-story, that's why it's only 6!
Kylo24
Kylo24		 Jul 29, 2009 i would love to see a spin of with the other types of magic to choice from
Bigbadmonkey
Bigbadmonkey		 Jan 25, 2009 kick ass man
Everlosst
Everlosst		 Jan 4, 2009
mechano1
mechano1		 Dec 2, 2008 really enjoyed it. i liked the way you blended in the modern mix with fantasy (as if mages and necromancers swore like us lol)
PaperWario
PaperWario		 Sep 29, 2008 I spent so much time on this. One of the best stories (interactive or not), that I've had the pleasure of reading on the internet.

Thanks
Kyylick
Kyylick		 Sep 26, 2008
Zarok
Zarok		 Aug 11, 2008
Deathknight13
Deathknight13		 Jul 8, 2008 Excellent, even though i'm new, and this is the second story at this site i've read, (the first being ground zero) I think this is a very good read.
Excellent work at interconnecting the branches together,

I had alot of fun reading this one, very well thought out and very detailed
Genesis
Genesis		 Mar 16, 2008
KatieWroteIt
KatieWroteIt		 Jan 8, 2008 This is the greatest love story ever written! I love a little gore with my romance. By far my favorite story on the site... possibly my favorite story ever written.
Thiefswipe
Thiefswipe		 Jan 4, 2008
Tulips
Tulips		 Dec 6, 2007 one of the best stories ive read
vegabond213
vegabond213		 Oct 31, 2007
Bryton779
Bryton779		 Oct 29, 2007 very good, i can't stop reading
SandDemon
SandDemon		 Oct 22, 2007 3 words...BEST STORY EVER!!!!
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt		 Oct 7, 2007 Well, now that I've done this, End is sure to reset the ratings for sure... right? :)

Perhaps you've never put this much THOUGHT into a story before, perhaps you've never hit on a genre agreeable to me, perhaps I'm waking up from a long nap... I don't know. This was a very enjoyable read.

Even with my eye for detail, I don't remember any out-and-out errors (although you may want to change "Narrow minded focus on killing someone" on the first page to "Narrow mindedly focusing...") that were so grievous as to destroy my concentration.

I particularly enjoyed the fact that some pictures had captions, much like there would be in an ACTUAL book. Have you considered having this published, by the way?

Excellent work. I only wish I could focus on any ONE story long enough to do the same.
neon725
neon725		 Sep 14, 2007
Salamislim
Salamislim		 Aug 20, 2007 This story is fucking awesome. One of the best I've ever read.
Salamislim
Salamislim		 Aug 20, 2007 This story is amazing.
Goren
Goren		 Aug 7, 2007 That was amazing. Best story I've seen yet.
scottmah
scottmah		 Aug 3, 2007 This story is fucking amazing. Thank you for that!
Futurecast
Futurecast		 Jun 13, 2007 Utterly Superb. I read every room with great enjoyment.
liamheregonnaread
liamheregonnaread		 Jun 5, 2007 true this is za best
liamheregonnaread
liamheregonnaread		 Jun 5, 2007 THIS IS THA FREAKIN BEST STORY EVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plastic
Plastic		 Jun 3, 2007
Jargner
Jargner		 May 20, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis		 May 17, 2007 I think this story wins for ratings...
BurntFlower
BurntFlower		 May 16, 2007 Brilliant. I think this has to be your best story yet.
Vesnicie
Vesnicie		 Apr 29, 2007 This is one of those situations where I wish I could give a half-point rating. I would like to give it a 9.5, taking off for some grammar mistakes. I also felt that the story meandered a little bit; it could have been a little tighter in terms of plot. I was happy to see big rooms with lots of action in them, but I would have appreciated even a bit more sensory description.

On the plus side, there are some very funny parts of this story and some vivid characters. Also, the plot is interesting and I'm always a fan of the anti-hero. I have decided to base this and future ratings on a relative scale for this site, so I give you a ten based on the fact that this is one of the five best stories I have read here.

And thanks for the heads-up on the carpet-munching witches. That means I need to not invite certain friends over for sleepovers anymore.
Victoria7
Victoria7		 Apr 15, 2007
Qflingspoo
Qflingspoo		 Apr 7, 2007 My second favorite story on this site.
Usoki
Usoki		 Mar 22, 2007 The sheer number of perfect ratings is astonishing. Part of me wants to ruin that just for the hell of it, but I'd have to be a total ass and pick a freakishly low number just to make a dent. "Surely," I thought, "I could at least find enough flaws to give it a nine."

And then I noticed that the story's outcome determined the moment you side between Big Red or the professor, and I was impressed. It flows very well, and doesn't ever seem to stall. It's a bit dialogue heavy in parts...but I get impatient after awhile...and, really, who am I to bicker about excessive verbose-ness? The dialogue and descriptions were either necessary for the visual imagery, or important to the plot or humor. It's long, but I can't really think of anything I could label as 'filler'.

The only thing I could possibly whine about is the freakish amount of power that the main characters have, that no one else does. Surely, someone out there would have been just as adept as at nature magic as the protagonist is at necromancy? Surely, the demons couldn't've taken over kingdoms that quickly? Surely, good could've put up more of a fight than just the sister? It all seems excessive. None of the lesser characters are nearly as powerful as the main ones. It's a ridiculous variation of God-modding.

But, really, who cares?
EvilZombi
EvilZombi		 Mar 21, 2007 Probably the best solo-author story on this site.
tandaman
tandaman		 Mar 14, 2007 I SWEAR TO GOD THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! So many choices...and so many good endings! I liked every one of them. Keep up the good work!
Calen
Calen		 Mar 12, 2007 Alright, alright, you've probably got to feel pretty good having so many perfect 10s, but man oh man you deserve them. Awesome story.
dnukem
dnukem		 Mar 6, 2007 Very Excellent story. I went back and chose different directions and each different choice led to a completely different place. I do not know how this story could be improved upon.
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Mar 4, 2007 Another excellent job EndMaster. This isn't my favorite of your works, but there is so much more detail and story in this than any of your other stories. Excellent plotlines, your character development was great and you actually managed to provide the reader with a series of interesting side characters.
Drewc91
Drewc91		 Feb 27, 2007 Yes! So glad to see another EndMaster story and a fantasy one no less!
glowworm
glowworm		 Feb 19, 2007 This is incredible,the fact that such a great story could be completed in only 2 days. I love the idea controling the "bad" guy for once. Lots of fun and humor too. and the violence-gotta love the violence.
xnull
xnull		 Feb 18, 2007 This story kept me enthralled. Endmaster created a world similar to others I have seen before, but led me through it in a completely different way. He kept all the details straight throughout the story, and only minor blemishes in the writing quality were encountered. Truly something to be envious of.
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Feb 18, 2007

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