Just an Ordinary Day in the Life of an Ordinary Girl

Author Rating Date Comment
justbeingme
justbeingme
Jun 7, 2012
Nadie
Nadie
Jun 4, 2007 Very nice! I can't wait to see what happens.... Still, I think it would have been better if the transition from present to past hadn't been so abrupt.
jp33
jp33
Apr 12, 2006
druidwolf
druidwolf
Mar 23, 2006 This is definitely one of my favorite stories. You have an amazing storytelling style, able to captivate and draw in your readers. I can't wait to see more of this story, or other stories from you.
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Jan 21, 2006 Let's see...9 or 10...I don't know.

So 10.
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby
Oct 2, 2005 A very unique story! It was a refreshing change to see things through the eyes of a female character. Finish it sometime.
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Aug 23, 2005 All right. So I had to pretend like I was a girl... But I guess girls have to act like guys when they read other stories, so...

Anyway, good story. It was kind of odd, which was what made it so entertaining. The whole feeling of "What the hell is going on here" was very well put together. Outstanding job.
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Aug 13, 2005 If I had the amount of estrogen flowing through my veins that was necessary to ponder giving a "cute" guy a ride for as long as THIS story handles it, I'd be watching Lifetime.

Other than that, a decent story.
YazZMaN
YazZMaN
Jul 4, 2005 Whoever made this is both weird and smart. Good story.
lioness1081
lioness1081
Jan 25, 2004
EnderWiggin
EnderWiggin
Jan 13, 2004 Pretty darn good. I can't wait to see more!

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